The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The line graph shows the global
demand
for the different types of textiles from 1980 to 2015. The textiles are distinguished into 4 different types. In detail,
demand
for polyester products has dramatically increased from around 10
million
tons
in 1980 to less than 70
million
tons
by 2015. Cotton has
also
grown from more than 10
million
in 1980 to more than 30
million
by 2015.
Demand
for cellulosic products slightly dropped in 1980 with less than 10
million
tons
and fell to less than 5
million
, and later on, slightly grew to nearly 10
million
tons
by 2015. Wool
demand
increased from 0 in 1980 to around 5
million
tons
by the end of the 1990s and eventually went down to zero in the early 2000s which persisted until 2015.
Overall
, the
demand
for polyester and cotton has significantly increased throughout the years. Cellulosic has
also
shown a slight growth.
However
,
demand
for wool has fluctuated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global demand
  • Textile industry
  • Natural fibers
  • Synthetic fibers
  • Manufacturing advancements
  • Fashion trends
  • Consumer preferences
  • Economic factors
  • Purchasing power
  • Eco-friendly materials
  • Market share
  • Production capacity
  • Polyester
  • Cotton
  • Wool
  • Nylon
  • Demand curve
  • Sustainability
  • Textile innovation
  • Fluctuations
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