The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals some information about the percentage of fresh
coffee
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and
instant
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coffee
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bought by Australians, and
also
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cafe
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customers in
last
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month in five different cities,
namel
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namely
Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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number
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a number
the number
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of those who went to a
cafe
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for
coffee
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or tea
are
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is
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greater than those who bought
instant
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coffee
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or fresh
coffee
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, except in
Adelaide
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which shows a relatively similar amount for
instant
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coffe
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coffee
buyers and those who went to
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cafe
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the cafe
a cafe
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. People of Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart have the habit of going to a
cafe
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for drinking, and over 60% of them did
this
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throughout the given period. By
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contrast
, residents of
Adelaide
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have the least proportion
in
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of
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going to a
cafe
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with just under 50 per cent of, meanwhile just over 55% of individuals in Brisbane have the habit of drinking
coffee
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in a
cafe
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. In the
last
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four weeks,
instant
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coffee
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was much more popular than fresh
coffee
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in all these cities.
Instant
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coffee
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made up between 50 and 55 per cent of approaches in Hobart, Brisbane, and
Adelaide
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, as opposed to fresh
coffee
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which accounted for under 40% in these cities at the corresponding time.
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, figures for approaches of
instant
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coffee
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and fresh
coffee
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are
relativley
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relatively
the same in Melbourne and Sydney, with under
a
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apply
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half of
populace
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the populace
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for both.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, instant, cafe, adelaide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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