You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart below illustrates the
number
of tourists who have visited the
coast
,the mountains and the
lakes
in a specific European nation between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
, the total
number
of overseas
visitors
to the country increased
significanltly
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significantly
over a period of time. The least
number
of
tourist
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tourists
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visited the mountains
while
the most travelled to the
lakes
. Between 1987 and 1992, there was a slight decrease in the
number
of foreigners who visited the
coast
from 40 000 to nearly 30 000
while
visitors
to the mountains rose gradually from 20 000 to roughly 25 000. The
number
of
visitors
to the
lakes
skyrocketted
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skyrocketed
betweem
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between
1987 and 1997 from 10 000 to 40 000
where as
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whereas
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those that went to
coast
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the coast
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fell slowly to about 25 000 and rose substantially to 50 000 in 1997. From 1992 to 2000 there was a growth in the
number
of tourists to the
coast
from 25 000 to 75 000. Between 2002 and 2007, there was
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plummet
plumment
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a plumment
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in the
number
of foreign
visitors
to the
lakes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, coast, lakes, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.

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