You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The chart below illustrates the
number
of tourists who have visited the coast
,the mountains and the lakes
in a specific European nation between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
, the total number
of overseas visitors
to the country increased significanltly
over a period of time. The least Correct your spelling
significantly
number
of tourist
visited the mountains Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
while
the most travelled to the lakes
.
Between 1987 and 1992, there was a slight decrease in the number
of foreigners who visited the coast
from 40 000 to nearly 30 000 while
visitors
to the mountains rose gradually from 20 000 to roughly 25 000. The number
of visitors
to the lakes
skyrocketted
Correct your spelling
skyrocketed
betweem
1987 and 1997 from 10 000 to 40 000 Correct your spelling
between
where as
those that went to Correct your spelling
whereas
coast
fell slowly to about 25 000 and rose substantially to 50 000 in 1997.
From 1992 to 2000 there was a growth in the Correct article usage
the coast
number
of tourists to the coast
from 25 000 to 75 000. Between 2002 and 2007, there was Correct your spelling
plummet
plumment
in the Correct article usage
a plumment
number
of foreign visitors
to the lakes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, coast, lakes, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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