You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The chart below illustrates the
number
of tourists who have visited the Use synonyms
coast
,the mountains and the Use synonyms
lakes
in a specific European nation between 1987 and 2007.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the total Linking Words
number
of overseas Use synonyms
visitors
to the country increased Use synonyms
significanltly
over a period of time. The least Correct your spelling
significantly
number
of Use synonyms
tourist
visited the mountains Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
while
the most travelled to the Linking Words
lakes
.
Between 1987 and 1992, there was a slight decrease in the Use synonyms
number
of foreigners who visited the Use synonyms
coast
from 40 000 to nearly 30 000 Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
visitors
to the mountains rose gradually from 20 000 to roughly 25 000. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the Use synonyms
lakes
Use synonyms
skyrocketted
Correct your spelling
skyrocketed
betweem
1987 and 1997 from 10 000 to 40 000 Correct your spelling
between
where as
those that went to Correct your spelling
whereas
Use synonyms
coast
fell slowly to about 25 000 and rose substantially to 50 000 in 1997.
From 1992 to 2000 there was a growth in the Correct article usage
the coast
number
of tourists to the Use synonyms
coast
from 25 000 to 75 000. Between 2002 and 2007, there was Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
plummet
plumment
in the Correct article usage
a plumment
number
of foreign Use synonyms
visitors
to the Use synonyms
lakes
Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, coast, lakes, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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