The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

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The line graph demonstrates the global demand for different types of textiles like Cotton, Polyester , Cellulosic and Wool from 1980 to 2015 year . when we look at the graph will show that Polyester touched the vertex point in 2015

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Wool suddenly dropped in 2000 and reached the nadir in the 2015 year.

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when we illustrate the graph cotton peaked slightly above 30% in 2015 after little decline in the 2000 year. Meanwhile ,

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the Cellulosic stayed in base point from 1980 until 2000 and increase gradually to reach 10% in 2015 requested globally.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

102 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Global demand
Textile industry
Natural fibers
Synthetic fibers
Manufacturing advancements
Fashion trends
Consumer preferences
Economic factors
Purchasing power
Eco-friendly materials
Market share
Production capacity
Polyester
Cotton
Wool
Nylon
Demand curve
Sustainability
Textile innovation
Fluctuations

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The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players. Others think that success depends more on the team’s mental strength. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?