The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The line graph demonstrates the global demand for different types of textiles like Cotton, Polyester , Cellulosic and Wool from 1980 to 2015 year . when we look at the graph will show that Polyester touched the vertex point in 2015
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70% .
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Wool suddenly dropped in 2000 and reached the nadir in the 2015 year.
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when we illustrate the graph cotton peaked slightly above 30% in 2015 after little decline in the 2000 year. Meanwhile ,
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the Cellulosic stayed in base point from 1980 until 2000 and increase gradually to reach 10% in 2015 requested globally.
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  • Global demand
  • Textile industry
  • Natural fibers
  • Synthetic fibers
  • Manufacturing advancements
  • Fashion trends
  • Consumer preferences
  • Economic factors
  • Purchasing power
  • Eco-friendly materials
  • Market share
  • Production capacity
  • Polyester
  • Cotton
  • Wool
  • Nylon
  • Demand curve
  • Sustainability
  • Textile innovation
  • Fluctuations
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