The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The charts show how many people had electrical appliances and how much
time
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they spent on housework in a country from 1920 to 2019. In conclusion, the charts show that more people had electrical appliances over
time
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, and at the same
time
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, less
time
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was spent on housework in
this
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country from 1920 to 2019. On one side, the
ownership
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of electrical fridges started really low in 1920, but it went up a lot and stayed at 100% from 1980 to 2019. The
ownership
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of electrical vacuum cleaners began at 30% in 1920, went up to 100% by 2000, and stayed there until 2019. But, electrical washing machine
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, which started the highest at 40% in 1920, went up and down, reaching about 72% by 2019. On the other side, the percentage of people doing house chores was at 50% in 1920, but it kept going down to a bit over 10% by 2019, matching the rise in electrical appliance
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, ownership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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