The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph illustrates the production of four types of textile (

polyester

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,

cotton

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,

cellulosic

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and

wool

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) from 1980 to 2015.

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, it is evident that all kinds of materials had increased from time to time, except

wool

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.

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,

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started as the highest demand

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off second-best in the end given period by

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. Looking at the details, in 1980,

cotton

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and

polyester

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started with 12

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tons

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and 5

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tons

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, respectively, and constantly inclined and reached 20

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tons

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at the same time in 1995.

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fluctuated over 20 years and rose to about 32

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tons

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,

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constantly inclined and reached a peak at almost 70

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tons

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in 2015.

Cellulosic

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, which

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by 1980, had more merely 1

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tons

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than

wool

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. In 1986 and 2000, both of them had

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amounts

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approximately 2

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tons

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and had different trends in the next 15 years in which

cellulosic

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almost reached 10

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tons

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and

wool

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plummeted

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of

cellulosic

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to 1

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tons

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.