Many people find it difficult to give speech or presentation in public. Some people suggest that schools should teach children to speak in public. How is it important to speak in public? Do youagree or disagree that school should teach at school.
Public speaking is a
skill
many may look down in
primary education, but suddenly realize is very important for the Change preposition
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future
. In my opinion, it is very important that children
are taught to speak in public from a young age. I will explain the reasons behind it in this
essay.
It is not rare that we see a smart person failing to correctly speak their ideas, just for the very reason they never learnt how to properly voice it. Public speaking becomes a very crucial skill
to have in the working industry. For example
, many job recruiters have said that they often find bright young adults they hesitate to recruit because of their lacking
communication skills during Correct word choice
lack of
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interviews
This
is often found in young adults as the current education system barely focus
on developing a child's public speaking Change the verb form
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skill
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In order to increase that Fix the agreement mistake
skills
skill
, it is highly encouraged that schools give children
a chance to speak in public. Other than helping them form a clear communication skill
for the future
, the skill
may also
help children
understand each other better. Said skill
is often overlooked as most guardians prefer children
having
a specific interest in skills like arts, science or sports. Change the verb form
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Although
these aspects are important, it is also
critical that they develop a
public speaking Remove the article
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skill
.
In conclusion, a proper education on public speaking skills may benefit not only Fix the agreement mistake
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but Remove the comma
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in the near future
. Hopefully, we can see more public speaking taught in schools to better help children
prepare for their future
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