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The bar chart shows the typical weekday for students in three different countriesSummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the typical weekday for students in three different countriesSummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph demonstrates three routins brackets of pupils in the
UK
, Germany, and Japan. The data indicates the regular
acrivities
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activities
 from Monday to Friday.
Overall
, Japanese pupils spend much more
time
 on educational activities and less
for
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 relaxation, but in
Gemany
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Germany
 and the
UK
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UK,
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 they appropriate almost equal
time
 to the three groups of activities. In the European
contries
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countries
 (Germany and
UK
), the pattern is roughly the same. British and German students allocate 7
hours
 to unwinding.
Additionally
, they approximately spend 8
hours
on
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resting (8.5
hours
 for British ones).
On the other hand
,
Germam
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German
 pupils spend a significant amount of
time
on
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studying (9
hours
 per
wek
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week
),
while
 their peers in the
UK
 spend 1 hour less. In
Jepan
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Japan
, it seems that education accounts for more
hours
 during the week with 13
hours
 for
studing
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studying
. Japanese students sleep for 7
hours
 per day,
however
, a significant drop is seen in the relaxing
time
 and
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virtually
 half of other countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • typical weekday
  • students
  • academic activities
  • leisure activities
  • rest
  • time spent
  • comparison
  • sleep patterns
  • cultural differences
  • educational system
  • commuting
  • variations
  • schedule
  • highlighting
  • differences
  • similarities
  • anomalies
  • amount of time
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