This diagram shows the basic formation of a brick.

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illustrate

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the process

to make

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of making

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a brick.

Overall

, there are eight stages

on

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to

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making a brick. The first

stage

is take

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is taking

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a

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clay

a lump of clay

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clay

and the

last

stage

is shipping the

bricks

to many material shops. In the beginning,

a

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clay

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clay

must be taken from the

groud

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ground

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by a digger. For information,

clay

is the basic material to make a brick. After the

clay

was taken, the second

stage

is

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put the

clay

on

a

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metal and roller machines. On those two

machines

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the basic

clay

will be mixed with sand and water.

Next,

clay

that

consist

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sand

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and water will be printed by mould or wire cutter. The result of the third

stage

is the

bricks

, but the process

not

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does not

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stop until there. The wet

bricks

have to dry in

drying

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oven for 24-48 hours

in

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at

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different temperatures. There are two temperatures, moderate and high. After

process

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the process

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in

drying

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the drying

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oven

done

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is done

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, the

bricks

will be placed in

cooling

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the cooling

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chamber for 48-72 hours. Next the

bricks

will be packaged and in the

end

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end,

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those

bricks

will be shipped to customers.