Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our envirioment. What causes global warming? What solution are there to this problem?

These days we are facing towards to one of the major global warming
problems
that
they
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are jeopardizing
to
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our natural
world
.we will discuss what influences climate change and how we can solve these
problems
together As we all know we are living in
modern
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society in order to
improving
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technology,
facility
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facilities
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and other significant
sources
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resources
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nevertheless
they have been providing vital
problems
to the natural
world
while
global warming potential and climate change.There are several causes to modify
environment
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included of
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including
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air pollution,deforestation,industrial
plant
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plants
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,fossil
fuels
and carbon dioxide.Albeit Individuals and
researches
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researchers
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are
also
to blame here because They make an effort to construct more and more facilities or scientists
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with arbitrary works
while
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and
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because of them
environment
can not
digestion
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all of these changes.I think behind these strange works,
earth
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the earth
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is encountering global warming.
On the other hand
,we need to figure out how we can tackle of global warming issues that we are facing now.
For example
vehicles and fossil
fuels
,they are exceeding around the
world
and almost all people have private cars and
i
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think
this
is not a good option,we ought to move from private cars to public vehicles and we can decrease fossil
fuels
to transport.
Another issues
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we need to solve industrial
plant
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plants
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and deforestation.In
fact
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fact,
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Forest rates are decreasing and missing nowadays in spite of global warming
is endanger
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while
instead
facilities have overreached around the
world
and
thay
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cause
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caused environmental
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environment
problems
(global warming).if we had not eroded of tree,we would not have come across
this
problem.Now we need to
responsible
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be responsible
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for
forest
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forests
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and planting more trees.As for carbon dioxide,
researches
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researchers
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surveyed for a
while
to learn about
environment
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the environment
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.Global warming
due
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is due
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to uncontrolled human activity and
researches
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research
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tried
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to commence or terminate
of
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snow,rain or
cloud
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clouds
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for example
the
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plane
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has
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spread
the
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clouds and it will be difficult to get rain
as a result
.
To sum
up
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majority of global warming causes consist of air pollution,deforestation,industrial plant,fossil
fuels
and CO2.To solve these
problems
i
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believe that we need to change the harmful sources into useful ones
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