Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our envirioment. What causes global warming? What solution are there to this problem?
These days we are facing towards to one of the major global warming
problems
that they
are jeopardizing Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
our natural Change preposition
apply
world
.we will discuss what influences climate change and how we can solve these problems
together
As we all know we are living in modern
society in order to Correct article usage
a modern
improving
technology,Change the verb
improve
facility
and other significant Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
sources
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resources
nevertheless
they have been providing vital problems
to the natural world
while
global warming potential and climate change.There are several causes to modify environment
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the environment
included of
air pollution,deforestation,industrial Wrong verb form
including
plant
,fossil Fix the agreement mistake
plants
fuels
and carbon dioxide.Albeit Individuals and researches
are Correct your spelling
researchers
also
to blame here because They make an effort to construct more and more facilities or scientists associating
with arbitrary works Wrong verb form
associate
while
because of them Correct word choice
and
environment
can not digestion
all of these changes.I think behind these strange works,Replace the word
digest
earth
is encountering global warming.
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the earth
On the other hand
,we need to figure out how we can tackle of global warming issues that we are facing now.For example
vehicles and fossil fuels
,they are exceeding around the world
and almost all people have private cars and i
think Change the capitalization
I
this
is not a good option,we ought to move from private cars to public vehicles and we can decrease fossil fuels
to transport.Another issues
we need to solve industrial Replace the adjective
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Other issues
plant
and deforestation.In Fix the agreement mistake
plants
fact
Forest rates are decreasing and missing nowadays in spite of global warming Add a comma
fact,
is endanger
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while
instead
facilities have overreached around the world
and thay
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cause
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caused environmental
environment
problems
(global warming).if we had not eroded of tree,we would not have come across this
problem.Now we need to responsible
for Add a missing verb
be responsible
forest
and planting more trees.As for carbon dioxide, Fix the agreement mistake
forests
researches
surveyed for a Correct your spelling
researchers
while
to learn about environment
.Global warming Add an article
the environment
due
to uncontrolled human activity and Add a missing verb
is due
researches
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research
tried
to commence or terminate Wrong verb form
trying
of
snow,rain or Change preposition
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cloud
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clouds
for example
the
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apply
plane
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planes
has
spread Correct subject-verb agreement
have
the
clouds and it will be difficult to get rain Correct article usage
apply
as a result
.
To sum
up
majority of global warming causes consist of air pollution,deforestation,industrial plant,fossil Add a comma
up,
fuels
and CO2.To solve these problems
i
believe that we need to change the harmful sources into useful onesChange the capitalization
I
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