The bar chart shows the amount of money which was invested by different museums in London.
The graph depicts the total investments by four museums in the city of London from June to October and it is measured in Pound sterling. The data reveals the
British
Museum
put the most amount among others, whereas
, the National Museum
was the latest one.
According to
the data, the British
Museum
chart fluctuated, starting in June with a little more than 400.000 invested and it remained stable until July. In August it reached its peak with more than 700.000 and made the British
Museum
the first place
among other museums. After that, it decreased gradually until October, however
, it is still in the top one place
. The next place
was the History Museum
which increased significantly since June and reached its highest in August with 600.000 then
it declined moderately each year. The third place
was the Science Museum
which remained stable in July and August and then
reached its top in September with 500.000. The most noticeable proportion was the National Museum
which became the lowest since the first. Although
it reached its supreme in August, nevertheless
, still became the last
rank among others never going up more than 300.000.
In conclusion, the British
Museum
was the top museum
that contributed a lot of money to the investment, followed by the History Museum
in the second place
and the Science Museum
in the next place
after
Correct word choice
apply
while
the lowest rank can be clearly seen was the National Museum
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