The chart below shows the information on how frequently people in the USA ate in fastfood restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart below shows the information on how frequently people in the USA ate in fastfood restaurants between 2003 and 2013
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar chart illustrates the frequency of fast
food
Use synonyms
consumption dine-in by the
people
Use synonyms
in the USA between 2003, 2006, and 2013. The unit measurement is in percentage. By the year 2013, there were two categories which have experienced
increase
Add an article
an increase
show examples
. With a total of over 30%, the majority of the
people
Use synonyms
prefer to eat at a fast
food
Use synonyms
restaurant once or twice a month. It has
also
Linking Words
increased up to 8% since 2006.
Moreover
Linking Words
, another preference is to eat directly at the restaurant a few times a year for 15%.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the tendency of
people
Use synonyms
to consume fast
food
Use synonyms
directly has constantly decreased in certain categories. The lowest categories including the every day and never that made up under 5%.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, in 2013
people
Use synonyms
who did it once a week had fall by around 27% similar to the frequency of doing it several times a week about a little over 15%.
Overall
Linking Words
, a minority of
people
Use synonyms
in the USA consume unhealthy fast
food
Use synonyms
at restaurants every day and others never do it.
Submitted by alyarachmadivaa on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: