The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graphs 3 US per
illustrates
the report about Change the verb form
illustrate
cost
of bananas in the USA, Japan,France and Germany from 1994 to 2004.
Add an article
the cost
Overall
,it is apparent that Linking Words
the
Japan,Correct article usage
apply
Geramany
and France Correct your spelling
Germany
was fluctuated
.Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
Whereas
Linking Words
USA
was Correct article usage
the USA
steadily
.
From Replace the adverb
steady
data
Correct article usage
the data
of
Change preposition
from
Japan
it is apparent that started from 2 US per Add a comma
Japan,
weight
in 1996 and dramatically Use synonyms
rise
to the peakWrong verb form
rose
Change preposition
of
weight
in 1998. Use synonyms
In addition
rapidly fell down to the lowest 1.5 US per Linking Words
weight
in 2003.In Use synonyms
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
France
data depict that Add a comma
France,
begin
with 2 US per Wrong verb form
began
weight
in 1996. In the following next 2 Use synonyms
year
slightly dropped Fix the agreement mistake
years
1.5
US per Change preposition
to 1.5
weight
in 1999 and gradually grew again Use synonyms
the
same priceChange preposition
at the
2
US per Change preposition
of 2
weight
in 2004.Use synonyms
Moreover
,Germany Linking Words
appear
Change the verb form
appears
that
Change preposition
to
started
from 1.5 US per Wrong verb form
start
weight
in 1996.After that slowly Use synonyms
go
down Wrong verb form
went
approximately
1.2 US per Change preposition
by approximately
weight
in 1997 and climbed to the peakUse synonyms
2
US per Change preposition
of 2
weight
in 2002.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
USA
indicate that startedCorrect article usage
the USA
1
US per Change preposition
at 1
weight
in 1996.In 1998 the price Use synonyms
increase
to around 1.2 US per Replace the word
increased
weight
.Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
year the price Linking Words
was remain
steady.Change the verb form
remained
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Vocabulary: Replace the words weight with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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