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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two tables illustrate the sales of coffee and bananas with Fairtrade labels in a few European countries between 1999 and 2004. The unit measurement is in Euros. The sales of coffee have had a steady increase in each country, the UK emerged as the highest with 20
million
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 euros. It is closely followed by Switzerland and Denmark with 6
million
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 and 2
million
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 each. At the bottom of the table, there were Belgium and
Sweden
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 which accumulated 2.7
million
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 for both.
In contrast
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, the banana has had various kinds of trends. In
Sweden
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, the UK, and Belgium the sales of it surged with 47, 5.5, and 4
million
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 respectively.
On the other hand
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, it has fallen drastically in Denmark and
Sweden
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 to just 1 and 0.9
million
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 each.
Overall
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, the majority of the population in
Sweden
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, the UK, Belgium, Denmark, and Switzerland prefer to consume coffee.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade labelled
  • significant increase/decrease
  • consumer awareness
  • sustainable growth
  • ethical consumerism
  • market trends
  • dominant market
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic impact
  • market penetration
  • exponential growth
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