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countries
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1950, Use synonyms
Africa
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country
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population
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followed
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Africa
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Africa
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America
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the percentage
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percentages
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the
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a
percetange
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percentage
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Africa
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percentage
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have
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apply
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such
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America
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Carribean
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Caribbean
America
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Ocenia
have a small increase in their Correct your spelling
Oceania
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America
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