The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps show the developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Generally, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly urban landscape.
In 1990, the town was a much greener residential area with a large number of trees and individual
houses
, but during the next 15 years
the seaside experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees along Add a comma
years,
South
railway were cut down, with all the individual Correct article usage
the South
houses
were replaced skyscrapers
. Change preposition
with skyscrapers
Moreover
, a new industrial estate with factory
and ferry sprang up around Correct article usage
a factory
railway
station.
The trees and Correct article usage
the railway
houses
in the West-North were reconstructed to make way for a
skyscrapers. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Further
improvements were built supermarket instead
of private houses
, they had experienced a negligible replacement up market
, between two roads.Correct your spelling
upmarket
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