The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps show the developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly towny landscape. In 1990, the town was
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greener residential area with a large number of
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and individual houses, but during the next 15
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the town experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable thing is that all of the
trees
north of the lake were chopped down, with all of the houses along the lake line being knocked down and replaced by buildings and
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.
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, a new industrial estate with
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and ferry sprang up around
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the railway
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station and car parking facilities. Only a few
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of the town remained.
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of the school and hospital was cleared from
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and new houses.
Further
developments were a new stretch of railway from the station running directly along the lake.
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