Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a debate on whether acceptance of a difficult circumstance,
such
as being in an unsatisfying job
or having a limited income, is the best course of action. However
, there are people
who believe it is better to try overcoming such
problems. And
I will discuss both of these views, explaining why I am more agree with the latter.
Passively resigning regarding a bad situation, is often the most Correct word choice
apply
convenience
option for some Replace the word
convenient
people
. Maybe it is due to
fear of making changes and expanding the
Change the word
their
comfort-zone
, which these Correct your spelling
comfort zone
individuals
are not comfortable with. Also
, those difficulties may not be solved, thinking individuals
of any efforts could be waste
of time and energy. Correct article usage
a waste
For example
, if an unsatisfied worker fails to take a substitute career which they are happy with, may they lose their current job
, by quiting
it, leading to Correct your spelling
quitting
quoting
cut
their source of income. Another example is, trying to live a life with financial constraints. Since it might be very hard or even impossible to increase salary and income, it is the best practice to endure life with financial hardships.
Wrong verb form
cutting
However
, there are some who argue that trying to overcome difficulties is better than yielding against them; even if there would be no improvement at all, trying to enhance such
situations will at least result in self-improvement of individuals
, by honing the
problem-solving skills or probably learning new things. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, if a person who does not like their current job
starts to learn new skills so as to by acquiring
them, they can get their favorite Wrong verb form
acquire
job
, fails
to change their career, Wrong verb form
fail
still
Correct word choice
and still
they
have learned new skills which is a self-development by itself. Tackling financial issues, as another example, will lead to Correct pronoun usage
apply
have
a better understanding of finance, and learning new ways of making money, even if they result in failure, again, they lead Unnecessary verb
apply
in
self-development and make Change preposition
to
individuals
more experienced.
To conclude
, although
some people
may think bad situations are out of control and accepting them is the only way confronting
them, I only agree with Change the verb form
to confront
this
under very limited circumstances, such
as having not
control Correct your spelling
no
on
them. Change preposition
over
However
, there are some people
who think addressing difficulties is better, as it is beneficial whether they succeed or not, which I mostly agree with.Submitted by negarhosseini00 on
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