Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is a debate on whether acceptance of a difficult circumstance,
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as being in an unsatisfying
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or having a limited income, is the best course of action.
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, there are
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who believe it is better to try overcoming
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problems.
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I will discuss both of these views, explaining why I am more agree with the latter. Passively resigning regarding a bad situation, is often the most
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option for some
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. Maybe it is
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fear of making changes and expanding
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, which these
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are not comfortable with.
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, those difficulties may not be solved, thinking
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of any efforts could be
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of time and energy.
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, if an unsatisfied worker fails to take a substitute career which they are happy with, may they lose their current
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, by
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their source of income. Another example is, trying to live a life with financial constraints. Since it might be very hard or even impossible to increase salary and income, it is the best practice to endure life with financial hardships.
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, there are some who argue that trying to overcome difficulties is better than yielding against them; even if there would be no improvement at all, trying to enhance
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situations will at least result in self-improvement of
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problem-solving skills or probably learning new things.
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, if a person who does not like their current
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starts to learn new skills so as to
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them, they can get their favorite
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,
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to change their career,
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have learned new skills which is a self-development by itself. Tackling financial issues, as another example, will lead to
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a better understanding of finance, and learning new ways of making money, even if they result in failure, again, they lead
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self-development and make
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more experienced.
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,
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some
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may think bad situations are out of control and accepting them is the only way
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them, I only agree with
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under very limited circumstances,
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as having
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control
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them.
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, there are some
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who think addressing difficulties is better, as it is beneficial whether they succeed or not, which I mostly agree with.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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