Professional sports involve large sums of money and receive enormous media coverage. Meanwhile serious culture, including music, art and theatre, is badly neglected. This is making our society shallower. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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amount

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of money and receive enormous

media

coverage it is commonly

involve

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for

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professional sports.

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,

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serious

culture

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cultures

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such

as music,art, and theatre

are

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rarely get the attention that they

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.

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situation is making our

society

shallower. I totally agree with

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statement because it is very important to let

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society

learn more about the

culture

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cultural

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perfomances

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performances

performance

. The

media

usually put so much

efforts

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to

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only professional

sport

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sports

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and they rarely do the same thing for serious

culture

performances. It is because

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society

are

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prefere

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prefers

to watch

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common sports.

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this

interest that

public

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the public

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shows,

make

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people think

to invested

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about investing

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more

to

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this

program rather than the serious

culture

one.

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,

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society

really

like

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to watch

basktetball

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basketball

so the

authority

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authorities

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and the

media

prefer to put their attention more on

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basketball tournaments.

However

, I fully agree that

this

situation can lead them into

shallow

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mindset

society

. Because they do not allow to know more about the

culture

perfomances

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performances

performance

. They tend to like to get

entertain

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by

watch

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the program that the

media

offers.

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, in

this

digital

era

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people rarely spend their time to see an art exhibition or even go the music theatre, most of them can get really bored with

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activities. Little that they know, there are various

of

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museum

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museums

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and

theatre

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theatres

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that offer serious

culture

in the most interesting ways. As I mentioned before, if the authority and the

media

keep

this

action going, it can

truely

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truly

lead

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society

to be

close minded

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about the serious

culture

it self

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itself

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.

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,

received

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large

amount

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of money and

media

attention it is commonly

involve

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for

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in

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professional sports. But I believe

this

action, can lead

the

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society

to be

close minded

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and have a shallow knowledge about serious

culture

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cultural

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performances.