The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the number of foreign travelers
in
around the planet between 1990 and 2005.
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It is clear that
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America
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in contrast
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America
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Additionally
, almost all of these lines are increasing throughout the period.
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To begin
with, in 1990, Sub-Saharan Africa and South Linking Words
America
had the same data approximately about 9 million, after 15 years, the proportion of the 2 regions is nearly 20000000 and 18000000, respectively. Use synonyms
In addition
, the figure for South-East Asia in 1990 accounted for 21000000, Linking Words
however
, in 2005, it climbed significantly by 29000000.
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On the other hand
, in central and Eastern Europe, international tourists contributed to 31000000 in 1990 and 87000000 in 2005. Following that, during that time, the rate of foreigners arriving in North Linking Words
America
always reached the peak and it hit the highest point in 2000 with 91000000 visitors. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, in 2005, the proportion of them decreased steadily occupied 85000000.Linking Words
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