The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The maps given illustrate the development of a science

park

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from 2008 and recent days.

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, the

park

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is more modernized along many amenities have been constructed but the green areas are fewer than in the past. To commence with, the

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originally consisted of several buildings, roads, woodlands, and grasslands.

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, a grassland in the northwest of the

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has been chopped down to make

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open land where the Research and Development building has been constructed.

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, the grassland next to the car

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has

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been destroyed and the cyber security has been widened. In the northeast of the

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, a reception was demolished but no one building has been developed there. As regards the centre of the

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, the car pack has been shrunken. A new cycle path has been constructed beside the road from the west to the north.

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, a new station has been added to facilitate the railway with a new path which connects the station and the car

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. To the south of the cycle path, an IT centre has been changed into an Innovation centre.

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, a Bus stop

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has been added in the west of the

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, all the woodlands, the business units, and the offices remained the same.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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