the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
This
line
chart depicts the Tourist Information Office's reply for 6 month
in 2011 in one place. It is clear from the graph that the questions came Change to a plural noun
months
from
telephone and personally increased rapidly during the Change preposition
by
last
three months. While
that received by letters or emails fell down gradually.
According to
what is shown in person and mobile line
chart, both of them went up. But, from March to April phone line
was constant, while
individuals keep rose until reached the highest point by 1900 in June. At the same moment, a cell phone was nearest 1600.
As for email
Correct article usage
the email
line
, its slope was negative and dropped down to approximately 380 in May. Then
, it became constant from month (5 to 6) in 2011 about
380 which was the lowest point it reached.
Change preposition
at about
To sum up
, we could say that the information questions were almost the same, then
both unwritten enquiries climbed from March to June in 2011.Submitted by bader.salem2001 on
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