The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries. The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use

The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries. The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use
This
table depicts a comparison between 4 countries about various transport to reach them.
While the
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bar chart depicts the outcome of
for
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what
the
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apply
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car
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used in
Canada
. It is clear from the graph that journeys made by
the
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vehicle
is
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the highest percentage in
Canada
, Belgium and
Germany
,
also
using other transport takes the lowest proportion for both
Canada
and
Germany
.
In addition
, no selection is the most cited cause of why Canadians use their cars.
According to
what is shown in the table, there is a high proportion of travel made by car in
Canada
, Belgium and
Germany
about 90%, 72% and 68% respectively.
Moreover
, using a bicycle to travel remains at the same level in Belgium and
Germany
approximately 2% for both. As can be seen in a bar chart, no choice is the greatest proportion, accounting for more than 35%.
However
, working the night shift is the least category that uses the car in
Canada
with less than 10
percent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, germany with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • journeys
  • transport modes
  • countries
  • survey
  • car use
  • highlight
  • noticeable trends
  • differences
  • analyze
  • discuss
  • significant findings
  • compare
  • data
  • connections
  • datasets
  • interpret
  • transportation habits
  • preferences
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