Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（重复2011 年老题）
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are very important for the community. Use synonyms
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others believe that physical activity plays a very important role in good for Linking Words
people
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this
essay, I will discuss both views and I give you my own opinion.
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people
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apply
This
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working
out. Replace the word
work
Moreover
, they will get more exhausted than before. Linking Words
That is
why Linking Words
people
after Use synonyms
work
prefer to go out with friends that feel Use synonyms
chil
and they feel relaxed. Correct your spelling
child
For instance
, in my country after finishing Linking Words
work
will go to their friends' or relatives' coffee shops or parks they rest enough to be able to Use synonyms
work
for next day at the company or their workplace.
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On the other hand
, doing physical exercise gives up Linking Words
people
's healthy lifestyle. Use synonyms
sports
help Use synonyms
people
maintain a Use synonyms
health
body by reducing the possibility of getting sick and avoiding diseases Replace the word
healthy
such
as diabetes are obesity. The sport Linking Words
also
reduces stress and to lead better mental health. Linking Words
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sports
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people
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For example
, in my country, the majority of women always try to keep body shop Linking Words
therefore
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like
day after day. I think Change preposition
apply
sports
are important for society.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
some Linking Words
people
don't have to spend time Use synonyms
for
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on
sports
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an
might be tied to their daily Correct your spelling
and
work
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, physical exercise to better than working out for an important society.Linking Words
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