the graph shows data about the annual earnnings of 3 bakeries in calgary in 2000-2010
the line chart depicts the revenues of three bakeries over ten years in Calgary and it is measured in dollars.
Overall
, Amandine Bakery has the most income among others.
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the data, Amandine Bakery remained stable in the first six months, then
it rose up
significantly until reached its highest point in approximately more than ten thousand in 2010. Change preposition
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Furthermore
, BoloCakery went up in the begininng
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then
it had to experience a decline in 2002, after that it increased gradually and hit its peak in 2010 with having above six thousand of income and made it as
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the
second place. The third rank was revealed to be Mari Bakeshop which had a fluctuated progress since 2000, and in 2007 fell down moderately till got its lowest with only four thousand of earnings yearly.Correct article usage
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