You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: •when and where you hired it •describe how the accident happened •what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope you are doing great. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the incident while
I was operating a rental car
a few days ago. Actually, I rented a car
from a local dealer of your company on 23rd March to explore the city's Downtown.
Unfortunately, my leased car
met with a small accident in the car
parking at the Lakeshore. Though I parked properly in the parking, a pickup truck hit my car
from the side while
parking and damaged the side mirror of the vehicle. Moreover
, I was in the shopping centre to buy some food items.
I informed the nearby police station about the mishappening immediately and they arrived on the spot for enquiry. A case was filed against the driver of the truck for rash driving. Fortunately for me, the driver will pay for the entire repair of the car
through his insurance company because he was charged with the entire responsibility.
Hence
, I will take care of the cost of repair and claim it from the insurance company.
If you need any further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
Tajinder SinghSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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