You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing great. I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the incident

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I was operating a rental automobile a few days ago. Actually, I rented a motor from a local dealer of your company on 23rd March to explore the city's Downtown. Unfortunately, my leased car met with a small accident in the parking lot at the Lakeshore. Though I parked properly in the parking, a pickup truck hit it from the side and damaged the side mirror of the vehicle.

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, I was in the shopping centre to buy some food items. I informed the nearby police station about the mishappening immediately and they arrived on the spot for enquiry. A case was filed against the driver of the truck for rash driving. Fortunately for me, the driver will pay for the entire repair of the car through his insurance company because he was charged with the entire responsibility.

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, I will take care of the cost of repair and claim it from the insurance company. If you need any

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information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Tajinder Singh

tajinder.panagSat Jan 20 2024

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coherence cohesion

Please ensure that you organize your content in a logical manner, providing clear paragraphing for each point. Develop each idea fully before moving to the next.

coherence cohesion

While the letter has an appropriate opening and closing, you might want to consider using more connectives and links between sentences to improve readability.

task achievement

Fully address all parts of the task. Include specific details about the accident, what was discussed with the rental company post-accident, and the expected outcome from the company.

task achievement

Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which you have done well. The tone should be suitable for the type of letter, whether it is a complaint, explanation, or request.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rented
agreement number
accident
incident
collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
report
evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
notify
immediate action
circumstances
chronological order
weather conditions
traffic
cooperate
return
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