There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The given maps illustrate the depiction of Paradise Island before and after a massive reconstruction.
It is clear that
a portion of the isle being kept as a research station and natural spring has turned into a supposedly an accommodation area to support tourism activities on the land. First of all, the sole dock on the archipelago that was relatively small has undergone an improvement to accommodate a bigger boat, or as the blueprint called it the "Cruise Ship". Not far from that, there is now a swimming site for people who wish to experience the beauty of the ocean.
Conversely
, for some attendings preferring a safer place to swim, a swimming pool was built really close to the hotel complex and is
subsequently
accompanied by an open restaurant
as well as
a BBQ place in the part of the estate that was once a scientific observation site and a forest. The natural spring is still located several steps from the rocks;
however
, a cafe was constructed nearby.
In addition
to that, to facilitate tourists who want to exercise their bodies, the management
also
made a cycling track outlining the place,
thus
the chance to look at the beautiful scenic lookout when riding their bicycle.
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