The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information about the proportion of smokers in seven different countries alongside the world rates between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that Egypt and Lebanon had an upward trend throughout the periods and another
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downward trend experienced downward trend.
In addition
, Australia and Mexico are the two states that have the lowest rate in the
last
year. In terms of the nations which have the downward issues in 15 years.
Firstly
,Australia's male smokers had the lowest rates in 2000 just under 30% and dropped to less than 20% in 2015. It was followed by Mexico, Armenia and the amount in the world which decreased by around 15% respectively from 2000 to 2015.
In addition
, there is no significant gap between 2000 and 2015 for the males who smoke in Cuba which is approximately 2% in 2000 to 2015. The remaining countries, Egypt and Lebanon had a substantial rise of more than 40% in several years.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart, percentage, adult male smokers
  • world average, increased, decreased
  • tobacco consumption, lung cancer
  • public health, awareness campaigns
  • government policy, smoking bans
  • health risks, nicotine, tobacco industry
  • chart analysis, data comparison
  • statistical trend, significant fluctuation
  • stagnation, steady rise, moderate fall
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