Tourism has become one of the leading sources of revenue in manu contries. Do the adavntage outweigh disadvangtage?

The

tourism

industry is one of the important income in most

of

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countries all over the world. The writer

argers

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argues

that

although

there may

damage

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to the

environmet

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environment

, the

benefit

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benefits

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of

job

opportunities and

developing

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in

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infrastructure outweigh the

drawback

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drawbacks

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. One

on

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of

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the

advantage

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of

tourism

is

proving

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more

job

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jobs

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for

resident

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residents

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. To put it plainly, every service in

tourist

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a tourist

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attraction

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attractions

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like

hotel

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hotels

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,

restaurant

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restaurants

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, shops …all need staff so it

generate

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job

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jobs

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for people in various

field

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fields

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and the amount of

tourist

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tourists

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come to the attraction regularly

that is

why the

job

will be

maintain

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in the long term.

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the survey,

tourism

account

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for about 10% of employment

worldwile

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worldwide

, whether directly or indirectly.

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,

tourism

lead

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in

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the reduction of unemployment. Another advantage of

tourism

is

stimulate

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the

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infrastructure investment. In

other word

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, the income from

tourism

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the tourism

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industry will be used to carry out various

infractructure

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infrastructure

project

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projects

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such

as

bulding

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building

road

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roads

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, public transport

network

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, sewage

system

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systems

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,..to make

they

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better .

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result

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the quality

life

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of life

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of local people will

be improve

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and it

also

attracted more

tourist

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tourists

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because of the good

infrstructure

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infrastructure

condition.

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, the

infractucture

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infrastructure

of countries will

be develop

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through

tourism

However

many people believe that

tourism

can pose a threat to

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the environmental

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environmental

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. It must be recognized that

,

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tourist

sometime cause damage during their visit in

attempt

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to find a photo opportunity so it

lead

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leads

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to over

exploitation

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over-exploitation

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of natural resources

also

destroying

habitats

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of many species which

consequences

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on

bidodiversity

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biodiversity

.

However

many

attraction

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attractions

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have a limitation for

tourist

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tourists

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in many natural

place

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places

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and have a strict punishment for

tourist

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tourists

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who break the rules.

Therefore

, the environment will not be

harm

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harmed

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by

tourism

with the

proctection

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protection

of government . In conclusion, the pressure on

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the environmental

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environmental

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environment

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is outweigh

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by providing more

job

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jobs

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and improving the

infracstructure

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infrastructure

.

Consequently

,

tourism

bring

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ht

hug

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huge

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revenue and

benefit

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benefits

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for many

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countries

coutries

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countries

around the world