It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a dispute around the increasing presence of vehicles driven by artificial intelligence on our roads. I cannot support
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technology is still not well-developed enough to be safe in emergency situations, Linking Words
in addition
, it can cause depleting demand for Linking Words
drivers
and increased levels of unemployment in Use synonyms
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area.
Driverless cars are not a new technology since the first attempts were made in the middle of the previous century, Linking Words
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vehicles on common roads started only a decade ago. Even though it claims to be safer than a human driver, in case of a rapid change of road situation Linking Words
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vehicle cannot react wise enough. One of the examples was a situation when a dog suddenly ran to the road and to prevent an incident car decided to overturn it from the right, but almost hit a dog owner who was following the dog, Linking Words
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, a person inside the car got bad injuries Linking Words
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, self-driving cars have a huge perspective to be used in taxi services. Linking Words
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is a convenient option for customers, but at the same time, it can make redundant a number of taxi Linking Words
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, it is not a problem for young individuals to get a new job, for senior Linking Words
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it may lead to unemployment as they don't have other skills. Use synonyms
For example
, the introduction of driverless metro trains in Sydney caused a round of lay-offs for train Linking Words
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and was detrimental to their lifestyle, their families, and the community at large.
In conclusion, some people believe that more self-driving cars can be beneficial for people and society. But I should disagree that Use synonyms
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is a good idea so far, as Linking Words
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technology is not ready to be widely used on common roads and Linking Words
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may cause a crisis in the taxi driving industry.Linking Words
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