The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
The given bar diagram illustrates how much GDP was used in health expenditure aspect in 12 different countries in 2002,2007 and 2012.
Overall
, it is clear, that Switzerland has significantly the highest amount of totals, while
it is noticeable that, Estonia has the lowest numbers at all.
To begin
with, in 2002 Switzerland and Belgium witnessed a huge increase amount, in comparison with Estonia and Lithuania because their totals have a declining trend. Furthermore
, in 2007 France had a massive rise, such
as Luxembourg and Denmark, while
the Netherlands experienced a slight descent.
Moreover
, Switzerland's numbers are the highest in all 3 years, as its amounts are staying the same, approximately 11 per cent. Accordingly
, Belgium also
has constant numbers which are 10% in all years, while
France's totals hover between 9% and 11%. In addition
, Estonia has 3 per cent in all decents similar to Lithuania, since their quantity of expenditures fluctuated between 5% and 6%.Submitted by palvdori on
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