One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports coach. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter: say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to recommend my friend, Pardeep Singh, for the position of sports coach at a summer school camp. He had studied with me from grade one to his graduation. We have spent a lot of time together during all these years, which makes me know how wonderful a man he is.

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, he is not only a good friend of mine but

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my colleague, as a high school football team coach during my teaching years, and he is very professional at his job.

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, he had completed his diploma in coaching sports with the highest GPA of the year 2018.

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, he has been coaching at a high school since 2019. During his college years, he won a state-level championship in football.

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, he is a responsible and confident coach with all the qualifications required for

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job. I think he will be a perfect fit. Thanks for your time and consideration. Your faithfully, Hardeep

husankaur131

Aug 2, 2025

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task achievement

Try to give more details about why Pardeep is suitable for the job.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words like 'firstly' or 'also' to connect ideas better.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to start the letter with 'Dear [Name]' instead of 'Dear Sir'.

coherence and cohesion

You provided a good introduction and ended the letter nicely.

task achievement

Your description of Pardeep’s qualifications was clear and helpful.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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