Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Improvement Suggestions
3Ensure that you provide more concrete and specific examples to support each argument you make. This can be achieved through real-world statistics, case studies, or reputable studies to strengthen your claims.
Develop a clear and logical structure throughout your essay. While your introduction and conclusion are present, offering a more defined separation between contrasting views in your body paragraphs will enhance readability and flow.
When addressing the task, make sure to cover all aspects of the question comprehensively. While you have provided a clear opinion and discussed both views, expanding on each view equally would make your response more complete.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?