IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 4.5

The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#show #performance #roads #transport #four #countries #summarise #information #features #comparisons
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The given
charts
 below
represents
Change the verb form
represent
show examples
proportions
Correct article usage
the proportions
show examples
 of spending on roads and transport in different countries from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
,it is evident that the biggest
percantages
Correct your spelling
percentage
percentages
spending
Replace the word
spent
show examples
 on
road
Correct article usage
the road
show examples
 was
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
 Portugal and Italy and the smallest
were
Change the verb form
was
show examples
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
show examples
 and
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
show examples
.
According to
 the
charts
,government spending on road and transport in
portugal
Change the capitalization
Portugal
show examples
 made up
approximatly
Correct your spelling
approximately
 27% in 1990,respectively.There was a trend to decline between 1990 and 2005.In the
end
Add a comma
end,
show examples
 it
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
accounted for 20% in 2005,
consequently
.Italy had
different
Add an article
a different
show examples
 trend that
shown
Wrong verb form
showed
show examples
 some fluctuation.The biggest percentages made up about 23 %,respectively. When it comes to
Charts
Correct article usage
the Charts
show examples
 of
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
show examples
,the biggest proportion
accaunted
Correct your spelling
accounted
 for
approximatly
Correct your spelling
approximately
 12 % in 2000,
consequently
.At the same percentages in
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
show examples
 have
trend
Add an article
a trend
the trend
show examples
 to progress which made up almost 15 % in 2005. It may be concluded from the
charts
 that there were big differences between Italy,Portugal and
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
show examples
,USA.
Submitted by kassymov_99 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "consequently".
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words charts with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: