You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, * explain why you have moved * describe the new house * invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Nancy, I'm just waiting to let you know that I got the solution to the problem we have been discussed

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time. Yes, you thought right I Found new accommodation. As you already know, my university is far away from where I live. And

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that my commute used to consume a lot of my time. I couldn't spend much time on my hobbies. I bought i new house near Hamilton Beach. It has 3 bedrooms with an attached bath and a small garden in front of it. The dining area, kitchen and drawing room are on the ground floor. It's located in the countryside far away from the Concrete jungle, Surrounded by a lot of Peace. On

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weekend,I've arranged a party for all our friends at my new home. I'll be so happy if you can join us. And of course, | need to organise my place and you know that skill better than me. I've attached an invitation card

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it in which you can find my new address. With lots of love, Shivu

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grammar and spelling

Be cautious with grammar and spelling to enhance clarity. For example, "I'm just waiting to let you know" could be "I'm writing to let you know", and "I Found new accommodation" should be "I found new accommodation".

development of ideas

To elevate task achievement, ensure all key points are fully developed. Expanding on why the new house was a significant improvement could add depth to your explanation.

task response

Your letter effectively informs the reader about the reason for moving, the new house, and extends an invitation, matching the task requirements.

coherence and cohesion

The letter flows well from paragraph to paragraph, maintaining a good structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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