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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, * explain why you have moved * describe the new house * invite your friend to come and visit

#house #friend #visit
Dear Nancy, I'm just waiting to let you know that I got the solution to the problem we have been discussed
last
 time. Yes, you thought right I Found new accommodation. As you already know, my university is far away from where I live. And
due to
 that my commute used to consume a lot of my time. I couldn't spend much time on my hobbies. I bought i new house near Hamilton Beach. It has 3 bedrooms with an attached bath and a small garden in front of it. The dining area, kitchen and drawing room are on the ground floor. It's located in the countryside far away from the Concrete jungle, Surrounded by a lot of Peace. On
this
 weekend,I've arranged a party for all our friends at my new home. I'll be so happy if you can join us. And of course, | need to organise my place and you know that skill better than me. I've attached an invitation card
along with
 it in which you can find my new address. With lots of love, Shivu
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grammar and spelling
Be cautious with grammar and spelling to enhance clarity. For example, "I'm just waiting to let you know" could be "I'm writing to let you know", and "I Found new accommodation" should be "I found new accommodation".
development of ideas
To elevate task achievement, ensure all key points are fully developed. Expanding on why the new house was a significant improvement could add depth to your explanation.
task response
Your letter effectively informs the reader about the reason for moving, the new house, and extends an invitation, matching the task requirements.
coherence and cohesion
The letter flows well from paragraph to paragraph, maintaining a good structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
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