Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In terms of financial stability, the government should create a

budget

with an equal

amout

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amount

of money within various sectors. These people have to take

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forward

along with

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as well as

statistically. There is an argument stating that

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a huge amount from

country's

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the country's

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health

budget

should be changed and

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towards

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health

education and

also

take some precautions. I completely agree with

this

notion and

this

essay will discuss

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points regarding

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statement. At the onset, It is believed that the federal government is usually creating a new

budget

every year and sometimes because

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some reason they can't

fulfill

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the needed requirement. If they are just focusing on the

health's

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budget

instead

of the necessary resources

than

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then

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this

can create a problem in the upcoming future. To quote an instance, In 2020 during COVID time,

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Germany was well known

by

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its marvellous

budget

plan. During

this

crisis

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the whole

country

was lacking of

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doctors and registered nurses. They have almost everything which is needed at the time of treatment, except the professional people.

This

all happened just because they were not having enough educational campus to train new people.

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building more infrastructures and investing a lot in the education

field

will create a lot more

number of

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citizens in

medical

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the medical

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field

.

By spending

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money on these

builldings

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buildings

and buying the necessary equipment will make the whole

country

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in a

well known

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position.

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, In China it is believed that about 55% of

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the population

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population

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the population

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is in

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medical

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field

and

this

just happened because the government took the appropriate steps. They are

also

the largest

manufactures

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of medical equipment in the whole world. They stand out

seperately

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separately

just because of the good

budget

idea. In conclusion, taking the appropriate

step

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and investing in the educational sector

wheter

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whether

in

medical

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or technology

field

, results with the best outcome. I totally agree that out of

health

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budget

plan, a lot more should be diverted towards the educational sector.