The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given table and pie charts give detailed information on various types of money
sources
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and the distribution of
budget
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to the 3 facilities( salaries, technology, buildings and transport) in the UK, between 2017 and 2018. The unit was measured in million pounds.
Overalll
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Overall
, the main source for the police
budget
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was the National Government among
others
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other
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sources
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and the
budget
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experienced an
increasing
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from all the
sources
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. Meanwhile, the most money proportion was allocated to technology. The total police
budget
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in 2017 was 304.7m and grew to 318.6 in 2018. As the biggest part,
National
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Government allocated 175.5m in 2017 and added around 2m in the next year,
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local taxes
also
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gave almost 100m in 2017 and over 100m in 2018.
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, other
sources
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like grants contributed from 38m to 38,5m
that
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period. There was a change in terms of budgeting for salaries and technology
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buildings and transport remained constant which accounted for only 17% . The former experienced a decrease from 75% to 69%,
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the salaries experienced a growth from almost 10% to 14%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, budget, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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