The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given table and pie charts give detailed information on various types of money
sources
and the distribution of budget
to the 3 facilities( salaries, technology, buildings and transport) in the UK, between 2017 and 2018. The unit was measured in million pounds.
Overalll
, the main source for the police Correct your spelling
Overall
budget
was the National Government among others
Correct quantifier usage
other
sources
and the budget
experienced an increasing
from all the Replace the word
increase
sources
. Meanwhile, the most money proportion was allocated to technology.
The total police budget
in 2017 was 304.7m and grew to 318.6 in 2018. As the biggest part, National
Government allocated 175.5m in 2017 and added around 2m in the next year, Correct article usage
the National
while
local taxes also
gave almost 100m in 2017 and over 100m in 2018. In addition
, other sources
like grants contributed from 38m to 38,5m that
period.
There was a change in terms of budgeting for salaries and technology Change preposition
in that
while
buildings and transport remained constant which accounted for only 17% . The former experienced a decrease from 75% to 69%, while
the salaries experienced a growth from almost 10% to 14%.Submitted by dilnurakari06 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, budget, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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