It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

I believe that taking

risks

is something necessary for growth. But I believe that it needs to be done with careful

considerations

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, the advantages

does

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not always outweigh the disadvantages.

For example

, taking the

risk

to try a new career path without any experience in that field. I would not suggest you

to

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instantly quit your job and put all your effort

in

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the new career you'

re

building. Do you already have a saving enough to support your basic needs

while

you'

re

building

this

new career? Is it necessary to quit your current job, or would it be possible to continue with your current

one

while

building the skills necessary for the new

one

?

Risk

is not something I'd recommend

to take

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without understanding your current condition and the

risk

you'

re

taking well. But at the same time, it's important to make sure that fear doesn't hold you back from taking

risks

. When I was little, I remember I passed on the opportunity to ride a banana boat because I was scared. That costs me a fun experience that's probably still safe, you'

re

supposed to wear a

life

jacket, and there are

also

other safety measures in place. Feelings of fear, that instinct of flight or fight

initially

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from the need

of

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survival when our ancestors

are

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still living outdoors and defending themselves from wild animals.

Life

nowadays in the city doesn't really have the same "

risk

" of death as the

one

our ancestors faced. That flight or fight instinct does not serve us the same purpose as it did for our ancestors, and most of the time holds us back

than

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makes sure we

survives

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. As an average university student with my basic needs fulfilled,

there's

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next to

none

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no life-or-death

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life

or death

risks

that I need to take day to day. Being vulnerable is

one

of the

risks

that I take in my daily

life

. I believe that you need to be vulnerable and honest with people to make genuine connections. Take dating,

for example

. How are you supposed to make a genuine, deep, loving connection if you are not honest with your partner? As someone

that

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has been betrayed and laughed at before because of my dreams, being vulnerable with people is something hard. That leads to me not having close friends and support, because I don't give people the space to support me. There, I took the

risk

to trust someone to be my partner, I took the

risk

to be vulnerable and

explains

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my feelings and experiences I'm not sure

they'll

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understand or agree with. But through that, we got the experience to talk through our differences and bond deeper. I took a

risk

trusting

this

person. It did not come from day

one

, there was a process of getting to know each other and building a bond before the trust

is

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built enough. But

that is

a

risk

I'm grateful that I took.