The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
The table illustrates money earned by
teachers
in secondary schools in 2009 in Australia
, Denmark
, Luxembourg
, Korea
and Japan
. Salaries were measured in US dollar
per year.
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dollars
Overall
, secondary teachers
in Luxembourg
received the highest payments at both the starting
and after 15 Replace the word
start
years
of their employment. Meanwhile, educators in Japan
had the least amount of starting salary annually while
those in Australia
ranked the lowest after 15 years
of their teaching careers. In addition
, the time needed to reach the highest level of salary in Luxembourg
, Korea
and Japan
was nearly four times of
that in Change preposition
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Australia
and Denmark
.
Among the 3 English-speaking countries
, Luxembourg
teachers
earned about twice as much ($80,000) as those in Australia
and Denmark
($34,600 and $47,000 respectively). The situation was similar for teachers
with 15 years
of experience in these countries
. In Luxembourg
, the highest amount a secondary teacher could make was $139,000 in that year. It is however
important to note that it took teachers
30 years
to reach top
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the top
Luxembourg
, while
in Australia
and Denmark
, teachers
could achieve the same objective in less than 10 years
.
In terms of non English-speaking
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non-English-speaking
countries
, Korea
offered higher annual pay to new secondary teachers
($30,500) compared to that in Japan
($28,000). As for teachers
who have worked for 15 years
, their salaries had no significant difference between Korea
and Japan
($52,600 and $49,000 respectively). Teachers
in both countries
needed more than 30 years
to grow their salaries to the highest amount.Submitted by morethansarah on
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