The chart below shows the change in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.

The line graph depicts the change in three different regions of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012. Generally, the

statistic

of car theft

has

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the biggest

number

in 2012 about less than three thousand.

Then

, the fewest

number

for crime rate was robbery approximately 500

cases

.

However

, there was a fluctuation

statistic

for

buralary

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burglary

. From 2003 to 2005 the

number

of car

theft

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thefts

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had been

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decreased to 2.000,

then

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and then

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it

is fluctuated

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to more than 2.000 in 2008.

Moreover

, the

number

it is

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increased for the rest of

years

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the years

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until hit more than 2.500

cases

.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, robbery has the fewest

cases

, stood from 2003 to 2005 the

amount

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of

cases

it is increased steadily to less than one thousand. After that, the

statistic

it is decreased gradually

onto

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to

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500

cases

in 2008.

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, the

number

were

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still increased but there was a fluctuation in 2010, until it increased in 2012

around

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more than 500.

Lastly

, the

bulalary

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burglary

statistic

it is increased

on

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the first year to more than 3.500

cases

, but the

number

pludged

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plunged

plugged

pledged

from 2004 to 2008

about

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less than 1.500 crime

cases

.

Then

the

number

it is

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increased steadily in 2009 to 1.500

cases

.

Moreover

, there was a fluctuation around 3 years,

then

the

number

decreased in 2012 to less than 1.500

cases

.