The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
The pie chart reveals the
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
people
when
Correct word choice
who
visiting
certain Wrong verb form
visit
holiday
resort
in Australia. Meanwhile, the table compares essential information during their Fix the agreement mistake
resorts
holiday
pursuit based on their original country.
It can be seen that,
the Remove the comma
apply
holiday
resort is dominated by Asian people
. Furthermore
, individuals from each country have their own preference
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preferences
while
staying at the resort, with Europeans people
take
the longest stay.
There are 37% of Asian Wrong verb form
taking
people
who like to spend their holiday
in one of the Australian sanctum, which make
them the highest visitors. Less than 2% Change the verb form
makes
from
that number, European tourists Change preposition
of
also
dominated that place since 35% of the population are also
going there. In addition
, the probability to meet
visitors from the U.S. or other countries on Change preposition
of meeting
the
Change the word
their
stays
is not high, since there are only 18% and 10% of them Fix the agreement mistake
stay
who
visit the place.
Regarding their Correct pronoun usage
apply
holiday
style, although
visitors from America tend to have seven days longer of
Change preposition
apply
holiday
period rather than Asian people
, both of them prefer to stay in up to 3-star hotels and do similar sightseeing activity
. Fix the agreement mistake
activities
On the other hand
, tourists from Europe and other regions accommodate themselves in a camp or campervan and share similar hobbies to do beach activities during their vacation, with the discrepancy for
six days longer for Europeans regarding the length of Change preposition
of
staying
.Replace the word
stay
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, holiday with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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