The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line charts describe the value of
Australian
dollars
during trading with three developed countries between 2004 and 2009.
Overall
, the three countries are China, Japan, and the United States, which indicate different
Australian
dollars
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dollar
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values based on the number of exports and imports between them. In the first line chart, it obviously can be seen that the number of exports had slightly increased over the five-year period, which began at about 13 A$
billion
to more than 30 A$
billion
in 2009.
On the other hand
,
importing
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imports
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slowly rose until 2008 but
at the end
of the year, the number
had
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apply
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remained stable at 30 A$
billion
and
crossing
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crossed
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with the export trading. Compared to Japan's trading with Australia, the values of
Australian
dollars
are mostly stable which are delivering goods abroad on average of 10
Australian
dollars
while
the contrast is on average of 20,2
Australian
dollars
. In the same vein, regarding trading with Japan, the data show different changes,
while
imports remained stable;
however
slowly declined
at the end
of the year
just
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to just
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under 20 A$
billion
.
On the other hand
, beginning at 20 A$
billion
, the exports reached
the
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a
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peak in 2008 which
more
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was more
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than 40 A$
billion
, but
then
declined significantly in 2009 to about 30 A$
billion
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, on the other hand, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, dollars, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.

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