The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line charts describe the value of
Australian
dollars
during trading with three developed countries between 2004 and 2009. Overall
, the three countries are China, Japan, and the United States, which indicate different Australian
dollars
values based on the number of exports and imports between them.
In the first line chart, it obviously can be seen that the number of exports had slightly increased over the five-year period, which began at about 13 A$ Change the noun form
dollar
billion
to more than 30 A$ billion
in 2009. On the other hand
, importing
slowly rose until 2008 but Replace the word
imports
at the end
of the year, the number had
remained stable at 30 A$ Unnecessary verb
apply
billion
and crossing
with the export trading. Compared to Japan's trading with Australia, the values of Wrong verb form
crossed
Australian
dollars
are mostly stable which are delivering goods abroad on average of 10 Australian
dollars
while
the contrast is on average of 20,2 Australian
dollars
.
In the same vein, regarding trading with Japan, the data show different changes, while
imports remained stable; however
slowly declined at the end
of the year just
under 20 A$ Change preposition
to just
billion
. On the other hand
, beginning at 20 A$ billion
, the exports reached the
peak in 2008 which Correct article usage
a
more
than 40 A$ Add a missing verb
was more
billion
, but then
declined significantly in 2009 to about 30 A$ billion
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