22/1 The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.
This
line graph illustrates the different prices of bananas for each kilogram in Japan, France, Linking Words
Germany
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
USA
from 1994 to 2004.
Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, the data reveals the prices fluctuated in Japan and France, Linking Words
in contrast
, there were no significant changes in Linking Words
Germany
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
USA
throughout the period.
In the first year, the Correct article usage
the USA
price
was about 1.8 US Use synonyms
dollars
in Japan, Use synonyms
however
, the number surged to nearly 3 Linking Words
dollars
Use synonyms
next
year. Correct article usage
the next
Then
it dropped to 2 Linking Words
dollars
and slightly fluctuated until Use synonyms
the
it dipped in 2001, which decreased to about 1.6 Remove the article
apply
dollars
. After the dip, the Use synonyms
price
grew to 2.5 in 2004. Use synonyms
Similarly
, France's Linking Words
price
Use synonyms
had
fluctuated dramatically in the Wrong verb form
has
last
5 years. In Linking Words
this
period, it started at 1.6 Linking Words
dollars
, the lowest Use synonyms
price
was 1 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
dollars
in 2003, and the highest was 1.8 in 2001.
Change to a singular noun
dollar
In contrast
, both Linking Words
Germany
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
USA
had no obvious fluctuation over the period. Correct article usage
the USA
Use synonyms
USA
started at nearly 1 Correct article usage
The USA
Use synonyms
dollars
and ended up at 1.1 Change to a singular noun
dollar
dollars
, Use synonyms
similarly
, the Linking Words
price
in Use synonyms
Germany
was 1.4 Use synonyms
dollars
and became 1.2 Use synonyms
dollars
in the Use synonyms
last
year.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, usa, price, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "dipped" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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