The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
The bar chart provides data about five different industries’
percentage
share of
Brazil
’s
economy
in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
Overall
,
finance
in both 2009 and 2019 had the highest
industry
percentage
of
Brazil
's
economy
and it is predicted to have the highest
industry
percentage
of
Brazil
's
economy
in 2029. As can be seen, In 2009
finance
had the highest
industry
percentage
of
Brazil
's
economy
with roughly 32
percent
,
whereas
food processing had the lowest
percentage
with approximately 11
percent
. The percentages of tourism and oil, coal and gas were the same accounting for roughly 27 per cent respectively. In 2019
Finance
had the highest
industry
percentage
of
Brazil
's
economy
with approximately 37
percent
, meanwhile, manufacturing had the lowest
percentage
accounting for 17
percent
. In 2029,
finance
is predicted to have the highest
industry
percentage
of
Brazil
's
economy
with more than 40 per cent. The
percentage
of tourism is predicted to be approximately 22
percent
which is expected to be twice as much as the
percentage
of food processing, which is predicted to be 11
percent
. In 2029 manufacturing is predicted to have the lowest
percentage
of
Brazil
's
economy
which is expected to be 5
percent
.
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  • economic landscape
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