The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The pictures depict changes
of
Change preposition
in
road
access to a city
hospital in 2007 compared to in 2010. Overall
, it can be seen that the access road
to the hospital undergo
a major development with the construction of some new facilities and Wrong verb form
has undergone
extension
of existing facilities.
One feature that has not experienced change since 2007 is the Ring Correct article usage
the extension
Road
surrounding the city
hospital. However
, new
roundabout was built in front of the Add an article
the new
a new
city
hospital and at the cross-section of city
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the city
road
connected through Hospital Road
. Furthermore
, in
the east side of the hospital, Change preposition
on
new
public car Correct article usage
a new
part
was constructed and was separated from Correct your spelling
park
staff
park Correct article usage
the staff
like
in 2007.
Change preposition
apply
In addition
, bus
stop Correct article usage
the bus
in
the west side of the hospital Change preposition
on
road
was removed and replaced by the bus station. This
station connected
to the new roundabout and hospital Add a missing verb
is connected
road
. On the east side of the hospital road
, bust
stop was removed and became Add an article
the bust
a bust
only
area for Add an article
an only
the only
staff
car park.Add an article
the staff
a staff
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