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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
#two #maps #show #road #access #city
The pictures depict changes
of
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road
 access to a
city
 hospital in 2007 compared to in 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the access
road
 to the hospital
undergo
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has undergone
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 a major development with the construction of some new facilities and
extension
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the extension
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 of existing facilities. One feature that has not experienced change since 2007 is the Ring
Road
 surrounding the
city
 hospital.
However
,
new
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the new
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 roundabout was built in front of the
city
 hospital and at the cross-section of
city
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the city
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road
 connected through Hospital
Road
.
Furthermore
,
in
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on
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 the east side of the hospital,
new
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a new
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 public car
part
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park
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 was constructed and was separated from
staff
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the staff
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 park
like
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apply
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in 2007.
In addition
,
bus
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the bus
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 stop
in
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on
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 the west side of the hospital
road
 was removed and replaced by the bus station.
This
 station
connected
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is connected
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 to the new roundabout and hospital
road
. On the east side of the hospital
road
,
bust
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the bust
a bust
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 stop was removed and became
only
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an only
the only
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 area for
staff
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the staff
a staff
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 car park.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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