The chart below shows the change in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line chart illustrates three different
crime
types - burglary, car
theft and robbery - in the city of Machester during 2003 - 2012.
Overall
, the number of burglaries hit a peak in 2004 and significantly declined from 2004 to 2008, while
the total data of car
thefts and robberies constantly fluctuated during the whole period. Additionally
, burglary was the highest crime
in 2003, while
car
theft replaced it in 2007 and continuously became the top crime
until 2013.
It is clear that
the notable feature was the dramatic decrease in the number of burglaries, which soared to a high of around 3,750 in 2004,
and steeply plummeted to a low of a little higher than 1,000 highlighting a substantial disparity in the data. After 2008, Remove the comma
apply
although
the statistic had slight growth to approximately 1,500, it never increased over 1,500 and constantly fluctuated around 1500.
Looking at the information in more detail, comparing the trend of burglary and robbery, the event number of car
thefts varied between 2,000 and 2,500 from 2003 to 2009, while
the data broke through 2,500 in 2010 and ended at about 2,750 in 2012. The statistics of robberies fluctuated between 500 and 1000, also
, robbery is the type of crime
which continuously stayed at the lowest during the 9 years, from 2003 to 2012.Submitted by jasmine2001tw on
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