The chart below shows the change in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line chart illustrates three different
crime
types - burglary, Use synonyms
car
theft and robbery - in the city of Machester during 2003 - 2012.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the number of burglaries hit a peak in 2004 and significantly declined from 2004 to 2008, Linking Words
while
the total data of Linking Words
car
thefts and robberies constantly fluctuated during the whole period. Use synonyms
Additionally
, burglary was the highest Linking Words
crime
in 2003, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
car
theft replaced it in 2007 and continuously became the top Use synonyms
crime
until 2013.
Use synonyms
It is clear that
the notable feature was the dramatic decrease in the number of burglaries, which soared to a high of around 3,750 in 2004Linking Words
,
and steeply plummeted to a low of a little higher than 1,000 highlighting a substantial disparity in the data. After 2008, Remove the comma
apply
although
the statistic had slight growth to approximately 1,500, it never increased over 1,500 and constantly fluctuated around 1500.
Looking at the information in more detail, comparing the trend of burglary and robbery, the event number of Linking Words
car
thefts varied between 2,000 and 2,500 from 2003 to 2009, Use synonyms
while
the data broke through 2,500 in 2010 and ended at about 2,750 in 2012. The statistics of robberies fluctuated between 500 and 1000, Linking Words
also
, robbery is the type of Linking Words
crime
which continuously stayed at the lowest during the 9 years, from 2003 to 2012.Use synonyms
Submitted by jasmine2001tw on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, car with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼