The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The line graph provides data about the
population
change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
Overall
, in all years Washington
had the highest population
, whereas
Columbia
had the lowest population
.
As can clearly be seen, Initially
, the population
of Washington
was 75000 which had the highest population
, meanwhile, the population
of Yamhill
was 30000 and the population
of Columbia
was less than 30000.
From 1940 to 1970 the figure of individuals in Washington
rose abruptly, whereas
the numbers of people in Yamhill
and Columbia
increased gradually.
In 1970, the population
of Washington
was more or less 127000, while
the population
of Yamhill
was 45000 and the population
of Columbia
was roughly 37000. From 1970 to 2000 the number of individuals in Columbia
, Yamhill
and Washington
rose. In 2000 the population
of Washington
reached its peak accounting for 247000. In 2000 the population
of Yamhill
was 90000 meanwhile, the population
of Columbia
was 75000. In 2000 Washington
had the highest population
, whereas
Columbia
had the lowest population
.Submitted by tmargaryan2006 on
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