Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argued that animal experimentation is useful to protect the human condition.
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others say that it is completely immoral. I believe that despite all the benefits that these methods can provide, it is necessary to forbid them to ensure their security.
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, many people think that we have to prioritise human security and sacrifice animal health. Indeed, these types of experimentation, where products are tested on animals before their commercialisation, help to heal certain diseases.
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a study made by the University of Toronto in Canada, in 2020, fifteen new vaccines were found , and 10 have been rejected after a few experiments on beasts. These tests allow for to certification of the security of some treatments before they are tried on humans.
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, it is said that we have to ban
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practice
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the fact that it is morally wrong, as during these tests, animals are suffering. It is normal to think that we can not give dangerous products to bestial, they are alive like us , and we have to protect them.
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, a friend of my parents, who works on a farm, said that 80% of his bestial who have been tested by scientists, have sequels for their whole lives.
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it is a good method to experiment with the safety of certain products on bestial. It is , in reality, completely immoral. And
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why I totally believe we have to find other practices with the purpose of protecting lives.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethics
  • Morality
  • Vivisection
  • In vivo testing
  • Cruelty-free
  • Animal welfare
  • Biomedical research
  • Toxicology
  • Sentience
  • Compassionate
  • Humane
  • Speciesism
  • In vitro
  • Alternative methods
  • Pharmacology
  • Clinical trials
  • Bioethics
  • Animal rights
  • Pain threshold
  • Efficacy
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