To meet the growing need for food for the increasing population, the country should make use of edible insects as food. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

An increasing

number

of

people

believe that the government should turn edible

insects

into

food

due to

the growing population in the

country

and the need for

food

,

while

others think that it is unhealthy and might have a damaging effect on nature. In my opinion, making edible

insects

into

food

can help many low-income families get

food

easily,

while

at the same time having a detrimental effect on the ecosystem. An obvious advantage of making use of edible

insects

as

food

could be an easy way for

people

in undeveloped countries to get

food

.

For instance

,

the

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comparison of

undeveloped

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an undeveloped

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and developed

country

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countries

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, many

people

agree that

people

in

undeveloped

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the undeveloped

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country

are lacking

of

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food

due to

the increasing

number

of

poeple

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people

. As the

poeple

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people

in undeveloped

country

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are

noramlly

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normally

staying in the

outskirt

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,

insects

are something that can be found easily around them. For

this

point, making edible

insects

as

food

will allow the individuals in the

country

to get

food

without paying a lot of money.

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Although

edible

insects

can be easily found and have it as a

food

, it might not be a healthy choice. There are an increasing

number

of

people

having

stomuch

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stomach

diseases,

such

as

food

poisoning,

stomuch

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stomach

flu

as well as

gastric

due to

taking too much

unhygience

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unhygienic

food

. Edible

insects

may not be as clean as vegetables or the meat that we usually eat in our daily lives, which might harm our

body

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bodies

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as our digestive system might not be able to tolerate

such

foods.

On the other hand

, eating

insects

is not a good

ideas

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as it will

cause

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a negative effect on our nature. To maintain a

balance

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ecosystem, plants, animals and

insects

play a fundamental role in which, to make sure our next generation can live in a better world. By increasing

number

of population in eating

insects

, the

insects

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insect's

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numbers will soon drop. For

this

point,

this

is a problem as animals and

insetcs

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insects

need each other to live and survive in order to

main

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a

balance

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ecosystem.

To conclude

, having

eidible

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edible

insects

for

people

could help them in getting

food

easier

whereas

it might harm

the

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apply

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human's

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human

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health and

the

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nature.

Government

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The government

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should do more and try to find other solutions to solve the problem of

growing

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the growing

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need for

food

for the increasing population.