You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter: give details of the celebration explain the reason why you need time off suggest a way to have your work done during that time.
Dear Sir/Madam,
The purpose of
this
letter is to kindly ask for some time off to attend a family celebration.
Next week, I have an anniversary, it is very important for me, to make it special because to
is our first anniversary. I would be very grateful if I could take off on Friday, I have a plan to take Susie for a trip to Aspen and Colorado. I understand I informed you a little late but I have already made all of my projects. Correct your spelling
it
Additionally
, I spoke with Jerry, and he agreed to attend the presentation on Friday.
It is important to mention that during my absence Martin will be calling, I would be grateful if you could let him know that the documentation will be provided on Monday morning.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any further
information. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
GeorgeSubmitted by dariusz.slusar on
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The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for the situation.
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There is a clear greeting and closing, which adds to the formality and clarity of the letter.